tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9171367346634124525.post729847968023039808..comments2023-07-06T07:56:43.032-04:00Comments on So F*cking Fabulous I Piss Glitter: Funny The Way It IsAprylhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17644829163969794409noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9171367346634124525.post-44678978601592813822009-07-24T12:48:41.942-04:002009-07-24T12:48:41.942-04:00I stumbled onto your blog, and after reading your ...I stumbled onto your blog, and after reading your poetry, I have a comment. You have a good facility with your words, and the structure of many of the pieces flow nicely throughout the piece. It is also clear, that listening to your narrative (what the pieces are about - subject matter), the stories have had a real impact upon you.<br />A suggestion: Instead of "Telling me what you feel, and what you experienced and did" why not try the braver step and help me experience and feel the pain, agony and anxiety beneath the words? In other words, it is a choice between being a narrator or being a story teller. The former gives a good deal of information but reduces the listener (reader) to the passive role of receiver rather than actor. The story teller invites the receiver intoher narrative and makes him experience the story.<br />If this is something you'd like some more information about, drop me a line, otherwise, good luck and keep writing - I think you have something to say! Bobartquest1https://www.blogger.com/profile/12041335296170184698noreply@blogger.com